Regeneration

[Fotografer]

Hey guys !</p>
<p>This is one of my first pictures taken with my dslr. I'm a newbie so plz dont critizise me so hard <img src="http://thephotoforum.com/forum/images/smilies/blueface.gif" border="0" alt="" title="sad" smilieid="108" class="inlineimg" />.</p>
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<p>I took this picture in Germany in a forest (I'm from germany, so excuse my bad english <img src="http://thephotoforum.com/forum/images/smilies/boggled.gif" border="0" alt="" title="confused" smilieid="123" class="inlineimg" />)</p>
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<p>Plz give me some suggestions for improvement !</p>
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<p><b>Regeneration</b></p>
<p><i>Start to breathe</i></p>
<p><i>Time has no effort</i></p>
<p><i>Feel things you disregard</i></p>
<p><i>Rays of sunshine</i></p>
<p><i>A Cool breeze</i></p>
<p><i>Feel your heart smiling</i></p>
<p><i>and walk further regenerated </i></p>
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